Analysis of Taught Passed



There the signs that thou warmth less,
Lest I was a push keeping river on,
Awakening sunrise that though gave up,
A plug of a cracked loved cup.

Thou depart forcing I was not aware,
Maybe considering the need be fair,
Stabbing, removing the hands holding thee,
Illusions of choking thorns free.

Remolding thyself from ash, God and air,
Perceiving glory conceiving lair,
Reconstructing the ideas from the start,
Smiling to myself upto my heart.

Stumping thine heart to level of debris,
Releasing the bird and cage free,
A past may never forget thee,
My heart a  portal for love immortally...


Scheme XXAA BBCC BBDD CCCX
Poetic Form Quatrain  (50%)
Metre 1011111 1110110101 010011111 0110111 1011011101 1001000111 1001001101 01011011 1111101 010100101 0100010101 1011111 1011110101 01001011 01110011 11010111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 609
Words 122
Sentences 4
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 117
Words per stanza (avg) 26

About this poem

About a beloved who cherished you before but did not last forever --- you kept holding on but to no avail it was only unilateral from that point in time. Because you love him/her, and you love yourself second, you decided to let go. You were crashed, but not dead. You rose up again from the ashes of uncertainty, and ready to love another person again --- in a better way.

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Written on July 25, 2020

Submitted by jeffreyroylopez on July 25, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Jeffrey Roy Adlawan Lopez

Jeffrey is a teacher since 2005. He is a/an: PhD holder in education MS holder in nursing licensed science teacher licensed nurse BS degree holder of secondary education and of nursing more…

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