Analysis of Sunflower Goodness
Zanur 2004 (Lagos)
Beautiful
too little of a word to describe you
perfect
too small minded of word to describe you
you are an aurora
glowing painting the skies green
amidst the mountains
you are a sunflower
blooming in the sunrise touch
Zooming in a bit closer
your flaws oh your flaws
they are there too
and I see them
and I notice them
and I accept them
For the evening breeze
never breezes my cheeks but I remember you in my thoughts
for the starry night never looks dazzling but I remember you in my heart
for each moment doesn't come alive
until I feel you sitting close me
day in day out
week in week out
I let our fireflies out
while I sit on my veranda
staring at them in awe
so without a reason
you would probably still find me
staring at the clouds
and smiling ear to ear
and without reason
you might also catch me
drop a tear to my palms
as I realize they are still empty of your touch and warmth
Scheme | XAXA BXX CXCXADDD XX X XEFFFBX GEXX GEXX |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 100 1101011011 01 1110111011 111010 1010011 01010 11010 100011 1000110 11111 1111 0111 01101 01011 10101 101011110101011 10101101100110101011 111010101 011111011 1011 1011 1110101 11111010 101101 101010 11100111 10101 010111 00110 111011 101111 11101111011101 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 921 |
Words | 209 |
Sentences | 1 |
Stanzas | 8 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 3, 8, 2, 1, 7, 4, 4 |
Lines Amount | 33 |
Letters per line (avg) | 22 |
Words per line (avg) | 5 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 89 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 22 |
About this poem
This is purely a unrequited love poem about a lover to his beloved
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Written on July 21, 2022
Submitted by shabamuhamad03 on July 21, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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