Analysis of Judgemental

Kika 2007 (Hosur, Tamil Nadu)



Smile a lot,
Laugh a lot,
Speak a lot,
Express a lot,
Then they'll call you
An 'Attention' seeker!

Smile no more,
Laugh no more,
Speak no more,
Express no more,
Then they'll call you
An introvert!

Smile a little,
Laugh a little,
Speak a little,
Express a little,
They'll call you the perfect girl!

(Oh no, what a world I live in
The way I behave
Says the person I am.)

Talk with boys,
Play with boys,
Walk with boys,
Then they'll call you a tomboy!

Talk with girls,
Play with girls,
Walk with girls,
They'll call you a well mannered girl!

(Oh no, what a world I live in
The person I speak with
Defines the person I am.)

(Don't I have freedom
To talk with boys
To kill my boredom
Of talking to girls as always?)

The society I live in
Is at fault.
Not letting me win
The life I want.

Just stop controlling me!
Stop looking at me
With judgemental eyes.
Stop giving opinions about me.
No one asked for it.


Scheme aaaaBx ccccBx dddde Fxg hhhx iiie Fxg jhjx fxfx kkxkx
Poetic Form
Metre 101 101 101 0101 1111 101010 111 111 111 0111 1111 110 1010 1010 1010 01010 1110011 11101110 01101 101011 111 111 111 111101 111 111 111 11101101 11101110 010111 0101011 11110 1111 11110 1101111 00100110 111 11011 0111 110101 11011 10101 110010011 11111
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 913
Words 219
Sentences 14
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 5, 3, 4, 4, 3, 4, 4, 5
Lines Amount 44
Letters per line (avg) 15
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 68
Words per stanza (avg) 18

About this poem

This poem tells about the way the society defines a girl's character by the way she behaves.

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Written on July 21, 2022

Submitted by heavenglory0000 on July 21, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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