Analysis of A kinner on the train



A Kinner  On The Train

A beautiful lady in saree,
sat  beside, in a hurry.
In a local train,
to reach Howrah in rain .
Dressed in vibrant,
female in appearance.
Suddenly,
she clapped her fingers apart,
on her seat,
When asked to push a bit.
She misunderstood,
A manly voice emerged.
"Why should I stand" she budged.
Unstoppable she burst.
"Why are we only cursed?"
"We are the third gender in position.
Male, female and kinner from generation.
For a moment, i sat there numb.
Without uttering , like a dumb.
I could read her insecure mind a lot.
"Aren't they humans?" I thought.
"Where are they at fault ?"
By default a twist in their life  arrives.
Dismissed they are to be a wife,
nor husband by chance.
"How do their living enhance?"
No gradation, opportunities,nor education.
They earn their living in hesitation.
Discarded at every place.
Let's stop this gender race in grace.


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Poetic Form
Metre 010101 01001001 1010010 00101 11101 1010 10010 100 1101001 101 111101 1001 010101 111111 010011 111101 1101100010 110101010 10101111 01100101 1110100101 1011011 11111 1010101101 01111101 11011 1111001 10101010 111100010 01011001 11110101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 884
Words 185
Sentences 24
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 1, 30
Lines Amount 31
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 337
Words per stanza (avg) 80

About this poem

This poem is about the 3rd gender that exist on earth and are also Gods creation. But due to the man and woman together present in them they are not treated equally and are looked down.

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Written on June 20, 2022

Submitted by Ruchiagltani on July 21, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Ruchi Agarwal

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