Analysis of A Letter From Your Baby
It's Mother's Day down on earth. I can see you Mommy. I asked God to please let it pass quickly so you won't experience so much pain
I left earth what feels like yesterday. God called me to His Heavenly home. Mommy, I love you and I wanted to let you know, God still allows me to watch over you!
I walk through Heaven waiting for the day, when I'll be in your arms. I want you to get through this day knowing I'm happy, healthy, loved and I'm always with you!
I left part of me in your heart, before God brought me home. I wanted to give you strength and guide you to Poppa God and me!
The tears I cry mommy, are those of joy as watch and feel the love you and daddy have for me! We are forever connected. Your tears are my tears, your joy is my joy, your heart is my heart, and your breath is my breath! I'm always with you!
Mommy, you truly are never alone, because Poppa God and me are always with you! So please don't cry, I promise that I'm ok! I will see you in Heaven, Mommy it's such a beautiful place!
| Scheme | X A A X A X |
|---|---|
| Poetic Form | |
| Metre | 110111111111011111111101110100111 1111111011111100110111011011111101111101 1111010101111011111111111011010101111 111110110111111101111011110101 01111011111101011010111110100101111111111111110111111111 101101100101101011111111111011111111010101101001 |
| Characters | 1,016 |
| Words | 214 |
| Sentences | 16 |
| Stanzas | 6 |
| Stanza Lengths | 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1 |
| Lines Amount | 6 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 128 |
| Words per line (avg) | 34 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 128 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 34 |
About this poem
I miscarried September 30, 2021 and it was the most devastating time of my life! The worst words a person can hear is there is no heartbeat! This poem I wrote for Mother's Day 2022!
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Written on May 07, 2022
Submitted by Donnaree1985 on August 07, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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