Analysis of A Feathered Moment, Concluded
Brady Bowen 1973 (Louisiana)
When I tied the feathers in her hair
iridescent hues among shining flax
her eyes brimming with loving looks
small feet tapped an anticipatory beat
blackbird, bluejay, cardinal, finch
the ascendancy of spirit inside
she sang a hymn heavenward
warning of a flitting, flying invasion of joy
small feet tapped an anticipatory beat
blackbird, bluejay, cardinal, finch
at long last waving the Rhabdos over herself
that ancient rod of great renown
no transformation of the transgressor this
small feet tapped an anticipatory beat
blackbird, bluejay, cardinal, finch
a burden of birdsong, up she bore it
trailing sparrows whistling in the wind
a dun-colored ribbon gliding behind
small feet tapped an anticipatory beat
blackbird, bluejay, cardinal, finch
an ave sung; avian arias
rose up from greenfields hither and yon
their chorus she wore like a gown
small feet tapped an anticipatory beat
blackbird, bluejay, cardinal, finch
I watched until she met the sun
great Helios, the Dawnbringer
august and beaming in his pride
small feet tapped an anticipatory beat
blackbird, bluejay, cardinal, finch
return flight of daughter prodigal
a shout-scattered murmuration of escorts
and the embrace of flame touched not
small feet tapped an anticipatory beat
blackbird, bluejay, cardinal, finch
They spoke of fair Perseis, her mother
the princess of Oceanus' halls
her love broken by Aphrodite's curse
small feet tapped an anticipatory beat
blackbird, bluejay, cardinal, finch
To be continued.......
Scheme | axxBC dbxBC xexBC xffBC xxeBC xadBC xxxBC xxxBC x |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 111010001 010101101 01101101 1111010001 1011001 0010011001 11011 1010101001011 1111010001 1011001 11110011001 11011101 1010100101 1111010001 1011001 010111111 101010001 0110101001 1111010001 1011001 111100100 11111001 11011101 1111010001 1011001 11011101 11001 10010011 1111010001 1011001 011110100 01101110 00011111 1111010001 1011001 11111010 010111 011010101 1111010001 1011001 11010 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 1,508 |
Words | 255 |
Sentences | 1 |
Stanzas | 9 |
Stanza Lengths | 5, 5, 5, 5, 5, 5, 5, 5, 1 |
Lines Amount | 41 |
Letters per line (avg) | 30 |
Words per line (avg) | 6 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 135 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 26 |
About this poem
For Jenny Dore, a feathered queen.
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