Analysis of My Happy Truth



The variance of my understanding
Falls far to the realm beyond belief
A virtual reality where I found my life
A place like no other, yet warm to behold

Had I not been curious before now
I would not have the gall to venture
To attempt to experience a new universe
A place only the bold & strong travel within

I tempted my tastes far and wide
Gathered masses and bedded them all
I tested my limits, my boundaries unknown
Through the milk and froth, I'm here

Yet, in my disdain, I had not found it
My search had not yet ended for me
I craved, I delved, I trod on rocky slopes
But I still had nothing keeping me alive

When further in, I found an inkling
A virtual reality I could be beholden of
A place I understood, a place to call home
It was there that I found a spark in me

And as I stepped further within, I noticed
That I wasn't alone, there was another
A dream I had dreamt once before
A house in the country, a porch, a pasture

A place I remembered before this life
2 horses, the perfect pair as they bred
As they ran, their hearts aflutter
They stopped and looked at me, at we

I know you, Izzy, I always have
I remember our marriages in our past
I've loved you for thousands of years
I'll love you for thousands more to come

And, finally, here we are, together at last
Truth of my truth, love of my life
Heart of my heart, husband & wife
You are and will always be My Happy Truth


Scheme AXBX XCXX XXXX XDXX AXXD XCXC BXCD XEXX EBBX
Poetic Form
Metre 010011010 111010101 01001011111 01111011101 1111100011 111101110 101101000110 01100111001 11011101 101001011 110110110001 1010111 1010111111 111111011 1111111101 11111010101 110011110 0100101110101 0110101111 1111110101 01111001110 11100111010 01111101 01001001010 0110100111 100011111 11111010 11011111 11110111 1010101000101 11111011 111110111 010011101011 11111111 1111101 1101111101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,392
Words 284
Sentences 1
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 36
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 120
Words per stanza (avg) 31

About this poem

I wrote this poem for my trans (mtf) girlfriend when we were close to breaking up. It saved my relationship and it's only flourished ever since.

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Written on March 23, 2022

Submitted by Theo.Drekaulfur2540 on June 02, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Theodoricum Drekaúlfur

I've written over 3k poems in my lifetime, received Editor's Choice Awards to over half of them. Former poet of poetry.com. My 3 favorite poets are Poe, Frost, and Hemingway. more…

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