Analysis of Night Stars



As I peer out through the blackened veil,
this night time cloth of light travails,
and who am I to see at all?
and what are stars that seem so small?

Cloudy wrestling swirling by,
sparkling diamonds far too high,
whirling clouds that hide the sky,
whilst cosmic ray beams try to spy.

Diamonds of the solar crown,
godly orbs that do not frown,
upon our small and mortal town,
whilst hiding under eiderdowns.

So what are these and who is there?
and why at night time do we stare?
at cosmic stars that will not share,
the solar truth: they would not dare!

Andrew Siddle/1st January 2004


Scheme XABB CCCC DDDA EEEE X
Poetic Form
Metre 111110101 11111101 01111111 01111111 1010101 1010111 1011101 11011111 1010101 1011111 011010101 110101 11110111 01111111 11011111 01011111 10101100
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 587
Words 128
Sentences 8
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 92
Words per stanza (avg) 22
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Written on January 01, 2004

Submitted by Andrew_siddle on June 23, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Andrew Siddle

I am an amateur poet who writes in my spare time. By profession I am a Property Consultant. I research, and contribute towards, academic matters relating to Property and land law in the UK and also deal with land and property technical matters in Practice. Through both public policy research, within the Centre for Urban & Regional Studies,and my own external research interests I was one of a number of contributors paving the way for the Countryside and Rights of Way Act 2000 back in the 1990's. Andrew Siddle more…

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