Analysis of Mountain heart in the lilac clouds.



The hikers hit the peak of the desert mountain.
Their shoes full of sand, mouths dry and skin tanned.
But when they took in the view
Lilac cloud over the luscious green and yellow sheen, it was all worth it.
It was as if an angels heart had exploded with energy and created the most exquisite elergy.
They took photos and sat for hours until their water was dry and food absorbed into the sky.
And then they had to say goodbye for their families sakes
by turning their backs on the utmost of landscapes.
Their visit like a vigil
With Arch Angel Michael.


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Poetic Form Etheree  (20%)
Metre 010101101010 1111111011 1111001 11100101010111111 11111101101011000010011001 11101110011101101010101 0111111111001 1101110111 1101010 111010
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 553
Words 110
Sentences 7
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 10
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 44
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 441
Words per stanza (avg) 104
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Written on June 21, 2022

Submitted by HeatherLydiaThornhill on June 21, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

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