Analysis of The Beings



Take your time and roll this dice.
a need at your convenience,
a drive only when you want focus and
a trail when the break fails.
not a SECOND  CLASS CITIZEN.
We seek validation with proof but no willingness to try,
We pursue barrels that leak till our pots get empty,
We make haste at sunset but its almost dawn and we lose.
What do you want?
not a SECOND CLASS CITIZEN I guess.
We're all in guilt and our egos bruised,  I'm not a saint but this is a clear proof that humans are self driven.


Scheme ABCDEFGHIJE
Poetic Form
Metre 1110111 0111010 0110111100 011011 10101100 11010111110011 10110111101110 111111111011 1111 1010110011 110101010111011110111101110
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 493
Words 106
Sentences 7
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 11
Lines Amount 11
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 381
Words per stanza (avg) 99
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Written on June 14, 2022

Submitted by Kushi90 on June 14, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Kushi Achi

Kushi Achi Nigerian, ambivert, thoughtful. Daughter of Ish and Prisc, who loves adventure and sports, fears death, loneliness and broken bones. Optimistic about the future. more…

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