Analysis of To Be In Florida..



I would go to Florida. I packed my stuff up from my parent's house and called for a truck to pick up my stuff. Then I unpacked all my stuff into a little cottage by the ocean. I live on my own with one friend and we both took turns making each other meals. We had fun doing that. I would choose this because I wouldn't want to live with my parents all my life and I wouldn't want to live under their rules. I would live on my own so I could have freedom and go where ever I want anytime I want. My friend and I enjoyed sun tanning and swimming.


Scheme A
Poetic Form
Metre 111110011111111010110111111110111101010101010111111110111110110111110111110111011111101110110111101111111111111001110111011110101110010
Characters 545
Words 113
Sentences 9
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 1
Lines Amount 1
Letters per line (avg) 421
Words per line (avg) 113
Letters per stanza (avg) 421
Words per stanza (avg) 113

About this poem

It is a poem that I wrote in 6th grade. It's about living and moving out of your parent's house and living in, Florida.

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Written on June 12, 2022

Submitted by WritingForever45 on June 12, 2022

Modified on March 17, 2023

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