Analysis of My hands were my language

Heather Lydia Thornhill 1981 (Manchester)



My hands were my language for I could not see
Nor could I speak
Or get up to wee
And all I could do was twitch but a might
My language was simple and simple in your sight
But I had many dreams while my language was written they were innocent they were wild they floated like a kitten...
But the most beautiful part of my language you see was the part where I heard you fall in love with me.
And as our souls met and spoke language be
I knew I could thank you for remembering me

My faithful nurse.


Scheme AXABBXAAA X
Poetic Form Tetractys  (30%)
Metre 11011011111 1111 11111 0111111101 110110010011 1111011110110101001011101010 1011001111011101111110111 01101101101 111111101001 1101
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 498
Words 106
Sentences 3
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 9, 1
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 39
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 195
Words per stanza (avg) 51

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Written on June 11, 2022

Submitted by HeatherLydiaThornhill on June 11, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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