Analysis of A prayer of the afflicted



Hear my prayer oh lord
For life's too expensive
That I can't afford
I created prosperity
But I did not have any
I showed them love
But they hated me cruelly
I loved freedom
But I was not free
I had eyes
But I couldn't see
Remember my oppression
Remember my affliction
Control my heart
And help me tread a good path
Remember me oh God
Be my guide
Don't put me to shame
But make me a good name
And a great fame
So that at the end
My life will be a legend


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Poetic Form
Metre 11111 111010 11101 10100100 1111110 1111 1110110 1110 11111 111 11101 0101010 0101010 0111 0111011 010111 111 11111 111011 0011 11101 1111010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 452
Words 95
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 22
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 16
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 354
Words per stanza (avg) 95

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Prayer, afflicted

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Written on January 28, 2013

Submitted by NanaKofiNkrumahAcker on June 09, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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