Analysis of Even When I'm Gone



Even when i'm gone, Promise, you’ll always remember me
You are so special from the bottom of my heart
I may not be here anymore, but I’ll be with you in spirit for centuries
Please be safe, God has your back, you’ve always been so smart

I’ve seen you cry, didn't wanna say goodbye
You sat in tears, gave me your last hug, filled with so much care

I want you to know, I’ll be in a wonderful place, Always trust God, Sweetie, Look up at the sky
I know life can be so unfair, You’re so strong, never be in despair

I wanna hold you in my arms, savior our last moments
I will be with you, take every breath of air, till the journey ends
I promise, everything will be okay, your so resilient, you can take on any opponent
I love you so much, I’ll never forget you, even when i'm gone we will always be friends


Scheme XAXA BC BC XDXD
Poetic Form
Metre 1011110110101 111101010111 1111101111110101100 111111111111 1111101011 11011111111111 11111110010011111011101 11111101111101001 110110111010110 11111110011110101 1101011111010111110010 111111100111011111111
Characters 822
Words 165
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 2, 2, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 51
Words per line (avg) 13
Letters per stanza (avg) 153
Words per stanza (avg) 40

About this poem

This Poem is about spending your last moments with someone you really care about and grefing when they eventually passed away

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Written on May 16, 2022

Submitted by Jlcarrington10 on May 18, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Jakeem Carrington

My name is Jakeem and I have always had a passion for writing music and poems, usually I write happy stories and poems but I wanted to step out of my comfort zone and write a poem about spending time with someone in their final moments more…

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