Analysis of Cabbage eyed



The white pokadots on the multicolored quilt.
 Lay in disarray on my comfortable bed.
  Purples, pinks and teals striped in criss-crosses.
  Keep swirling in my head.

The biggest thing on my fried, filled mind.
  Is the night of carnage when I was a little kid.
 Swirling, rolling , like waves.
 These thoughts of total ravage.

As I am writing
 I am in pain.
My eyes feel like cabbage
My head is so swollen that I can barely live.


Scheme XAXA XXXB XXBX
Poetic Form
Metre 011100101 10011110001 1010110110 110011 010111111 1011101110101 101011 1111010 11110 1101 111110 111110111101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 435
Words 88
Sentences 10
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 109
Words per stanza (avg) 26

About this poem

I wrote it last evening while I was suffering from a week of insomnia.

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Submitted by Kellytullmartinez on May 27, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Kelly Tull-Martinez

I've studied poetry all my life. I had 3 years of College poetry. Mostly in highschool. I've won many awards during my life but I've never published. more…

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