Analysis of A piteous plaint

Eugene Field 1850 (St. Louis) – 1895 (Chicago)



I cannot eat my porridge,
 I weary of my play;
No longer can I sleep at night,
 No longer romp by day!
Though forty pounds was once my weight,
 I'm shy of thirty now;
I pine, I wither and I fade
 Through love of Martha Clow.

As she rolled by this morning
 I heard the nurse girl say:
"She weighs just twenty-seven pounds
 And she's one year old to-day."
I threw a kiss that nestled
 In the curls upon her brow,
But she never turned to thank me--
 That bouncing Martha Clow!

She ought to know I love her,
 For I've told her that I do;
And I've brought her nuts and apples,
 And sometimes candy, too!
I'd drag her in my little cart
 If her mother would allow
That delicate attention
 To her daughter, Martha Clow.

O Martha! pretty Martha!
 Will you always be so cold?
Will you always be as cruel
 As you are at one-year-old?
Must your two-year-old admirer
 Pine as hopelessly as now
For a fond reciprocation
 Of his love for Martha Clow?

You smile on Bernard Rogers
 And on little Harry Knott;
You play with them at peek-a-boo
 All in the Waller Lot!
Wildly I gnash my new-cut teeth
 And beat my throbbing brow,
When I behold the coquetry
 Of heartless Martha Clow!

I cannot eat my porridge,
 Nor for my play care I;
Upon the floor and porch and lawn
 My toys neglected lie;
But on the air of Halsted street
 I breathe this solemn vow:
"Though she be false, I will be true
 To pretty Martha Clow!"


Scheme Abxbxcxd xbxbxcxd efxfxcxd xgxgeccd xhfhxced Aixixcfd
Poetic Form
Metre 1101110 110111 11011111 110111 11011111 111101 11110011 111101 1111110 110111 11110101 0111111 1101110 0010101 11101111 110101 1111110 1110111 01101010 001101 11001101 1010101 1100010 1010101 1101010 111111 1111110 1111111 11111010 1110011 1011 1111101 1110110 0110101 11111101 100101 10111111 011101 110101 110101 1101110 111111 01010101 110101 11011101 111101 11111111 110101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,356
Words 268
Sentences 15
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 8, 8, 8, 8, 8, 8
Lines Amount 48
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 176
Words per stanza (avg) 44
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:21 min read
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Eugene Field

Eugene Field, Sr. was an American writer, best known for his children's poetry and humorous essays. more…

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