Analysis of don/t like leaving



just when the colors are showing
they say its time to be going
when the oak the elm the maple
are all dressed up well
why are our colors weighing us down
why can't we stay up on our trees crowd
gravity states  don't blame me
unless you weigh more in color
leaves don't leave trees on me
leaves complain they cry in gathered forced piles
why do we have to leave the trees of our lives
so much to cover so much to carry on
so much to tarry with the breeze move us strong


Scheme AABCDEFGFHIJK
Poetic Form
Metre 11010110 11111110 10101010 11111 1110101011 1111111011 1001111 01111010 111111 1011101011 111111011101 11110111101 11110101111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 468
Words 96
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 13
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 369
Words per stanza (avg) 97

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a oblique poem

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Written on June 03, 2022

Submitted by wblsm on June 03, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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