Analysis of In The Desert

Ernest Favenc 1845 (Walworth, Surrey) – 1908 (Sydney, New South Wales)



A cloudless sky o’erhead, and all around
The level country stretching like a sea—
A dull grey sea, that had no seeming bound,
The very semblance of eternity.

All common things that this poor life contained
Had passed from me, leaving no sign nor token;
My footfall first broke stillness that had reigned
For centuries unbroken.

Almost it was as if my steps had strayed
Into some strange old land or unknown isle,
Where Time himself, with drowsy hand had stayed
The shadow on the dial.

The sun at even sank down angry red
In the dim haze that bounded the far plain;
And then the stars usurped the heavens instead,
With silence in their train—

A deep, dread silence, save when fitful sighs
Of wailing wind were wafted from the south.
Nature seemed dying: light had left her eyes,
The smile of her mouth.

Only in dreams unquietly she talked,
In broken murmurs restlessly did ’plain;
Then came strange sounds, as if a spirit walked,
Wringing its hands in pain,

Crying, ‘No rest! no rest! Who dares intrude,
And waken silence that for countless years
Has been unbroken? Must our solitude
At last know human tears?

Leave but a little space, O restless race!
Free from your carking vanity and care.
Keep back! keep back!’ And then, a phantom face
Shone lurid in the air,

Gazing in mine, with a strange, earnest look
Of solemn sadness, more than mortal pain,
Then vanished with a bitter cry that shook
The dim, dead plain.


Scheme ABAB CDCD EXEX FGFG HIHI JGJG KXKX LMLM NGNG
Poetic Form Quatrain  (78%)
Metre 010110101 0101010101 0111111101 0101010100 1101111101 11111011110 111110111 1100010 111111111 0111111011 1101110111 011010 0111011101 0011110011 0101101001 110011 0111011101 1101010101 1011011101 01101 1001111 0101010011 1111110101 101101 1011111101 0101011101 1101011010 111101 1101011101 111110001 1111010101 110001 1001101101 1101011101 1101010111 0111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,399
Words 256
Sentences 15
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 36
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 124
Words per stanza (avg) 28
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:16 min read
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Ernest Favenc

Ernest Favenc was an explorer of Australia, a journalist, author of verse, novels and short stories, and an historian. more…

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