Analysis of A girl in the rain



Rain O' Rain
Through all her eyes and in my pain,
I still see the mist of joy in simmering clouds,
All through your body and in your vein,
You're really the girl from the rain -

if not i be happy,
why would i love,
in all your memories and my lonely sunburn roof,
all that pleasures is your rain and a little,
perhaps too little of a goof -

i know, i still feel its a mistake,
to drench in your rain,
but isn't this a medley of pleasure,
being with you,
the girl from the rain -

little bits and a lot of bytes,
a binary or a saturn,
maybe a storm lusting in nights,
i can still feel the rain,
all in my dreams,
in mayheaven or crimson creams -

poem is not for the dead,
neither for the live,
all that matters,
is who tears in the streets of life,
then again it rains and i think of you,
through my lost mobiles and the streets of Tagore’s,
the caffe where i waited in bewildered heaven,
for you to come from the rain -

then i hear the screams,
not from others but its you in my dreams,
the time to rejoice for last,
or the time to soak in pain,
you really adored while coming from rain -

thus in the middle for all that’s lost,
i see, i cry, i did smiled a lot,
not for that rain,
but for you who thunders the most -

was there in the night,
when the storm took place,
then i saw you coming,
as if really the girl from the rain -

maybe you wrote the equations,
with a lot of numbers either the symbols,
i didn’t even know,
that your poetry did smiled at me,
when you rains all from thee -

at the end its the july,
or might be september,
its not the warmth rather too dusty,
from emotions and those smiley’s,
that i now barely imagine all in the streets,
when you'll rain -

war in the ceremony,
time to get shot,
what else could barely matters,
pouring the tea in the nasty battlefield,
from your melancholic pot,
then the clouds murmured,
the leaves shattered,
the fog and all those bloods that drain,
waiting for you to see coming from the rain -

feels in the skies,
chocked in my dines,
i can't get through the way,
nature still smiles in bursts of my lost gains,
to see you coming from that rain -

won't you get a little tired,
maybe more,
to rain in days and nights,
in joys, in sorrows, in smiles, in poems,
or perhaps in your mathematics that you left being unsolved,
the day you first rains -

all in all,
nature is now so in joy,
far from the rustles in her whistles,
to keep the birds away,
before it rains -

she too is tired from your sporadic ways,
but believe me,
you solace the world,
might not be those lofty birds in freedom flying free from pains,
when they saw you again going for a deterrent rain -

there's a way in every mistakes,
just as a pattern in every disorders,
its still the sweet n' sour,
or the hell in a flower,
when the devil even melts,
from the thrust of your rains -

ah! you do rains even if gone,
in the hell may not be the heaven,
i can't even feel when you go,
solacing this burning earth in rain -

i left my mathematics and a lot of physics,
stopped all my research,
running all the way to the roof,
to see the salvation falls from clouds,
its really dark in a deadly glow,
a black maybe drowning all my desires in my vains,
still i find the courage to stand up when you rains -

a tea or a smoke,
the night owl over the lonely hills,
can you hear what’s he say?
when i was in the blankets,
too cold to walk or too warm to speak,
in my sleeps,
between the moonlight nights and midsummer days,
when i see you coming from the rains -

how much more can i say,
when i still see you in all my lost and gains,
you really are the girl coming from the rains!


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Poetic Form
Metre 111 11010011 111011101001 111100011 11001101 111110 1111 011100011011 11101110010 01110101 111111001 11011 1101010110 1011 01101 10100111 01001010 10011001 111101 1011 011101 1011101 10101 1110 11100111 1011101111 1111000111 011110001010 1111101 11101 1110111011 0110111 1011101 1100111011 100101111 111111101 1111 11111001 11001 10111 111110 111001101 10110010 10111010010 11101 111001111 111111 101101 111010 110110110 1010011 111100101001 111 100100 1111 1111010 1001001010 110101 10110 0110 01011111 10111110101 1001 1011 111101 1011011111 11110111 11101010 101 110101 0101001010 101010101111001 01111 101 1011101 11010010 110101 0111 11110110101 1011 11001 111110101010111 11110110100101 101010001 110100100010 1101110 1010010 1010101 101111 11111011 001111010 11101111 1110101 111010001110 11101 10101101 110010111 110100101 01101011010011 111010111111 01101 011100101 111011 1110010 111111111 011 0101101101 111110101 111111 11111011101 11010110101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 3,617
Words 833
Sentences 3
Stanzas 20
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 5, 6, 8, 5, 4, 4, 5, 6, 9, 5, 6, 5, 5, 6, 4, 7, 8, 3
Lines Amount 111
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 137
Words per stanza (avg) 36

About this poem

its not about her that i missed, but its about finding her again in the mist.

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Submitted on May 17, 2022

Modified on April 18, 2023

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Deep Bhattacharjee

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