Analysis of Sinner's refuge
Long ago, I've gone astray
From land and sun I knew I'd sway
and so I found myself along the sea,
its restless blue left me enthralled
and soon,
I heard the sirens as they called.
As I let the water greet my feet,
I look at him for one last time
he who for a second,
turns all my nothings into everything divine,
just for a second,
turns raging storms into wind chimes.
I understand, I do not plea
when he's turned his eyes away from me,
my bottle full of broken vows thrown into bay,
and then
I watch the waves take god away.
The pressure knocks against my skull
from upside down and left and right
and I do not look around but close my eyes
embrace the deafening sound,
the underworld's lovely and deceitful cry.
While unbeknownst and quietly,
escapes a single tear
of burden soft and light,
last breath of innocence in hidden sight.
And now I know, with certainty
I'm at a loss against the gravity
which pulls me down the darkened sea
farther,
closer,
til i'm near
pulls me deeper
deeper
deeper
how much deeper?
Til I reach the ground,
til my flesh grows cold, then foul,
falls prey to starving beasts
(and in their hunger I see me)
longing for something
that fills their insides
with purpose as they feast.
But gladly I will give myself to them
if it brings me to the depths beneath the bottom
the world of those who dared forget the sky,
forget what was once beyond the shore,
yet are still yearning for the light
in their every rotten core.
Because where else could I have gone
other than here?
Where else would now be
my soul so shivering and clear.
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 1011101 11011111 011110101 11011101 01 11010111 111010111 11111111 111010 11110011001 11010 11010111 1011111 111110111 110111011011 01 11011101 01010111 11110101 01111011111 0101001 011000101 10010100 010101 110101 1111000101 01111100 1101010100 11110101 10 10 111 1110 10 10 1110 11101 1111111 111101 00110111 10110 11101 110111 110111111 111110101010 0111110101 011110101 11110101 01100101 01111111 1011 11111 11110001 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 1,570 |
Words | 332 |
Sentences | 10 |
Stanzas | 12 |
Stanza Lengths | 6, 6, 5, 5, 4, 6, 3, 1, 7, 6, 2, 2 |
Lines Amount | 53 |
Letters per line (avg) | 23 |
Words per line (avg) | 6 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 102 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 25 |
About this poem
For sometimes the sea is the only place that will take you. A poem I made after listening to "Never Let Me Go" by Florence and The Machine.
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Submitted by phenomenon on May 11, 2022
Modified by phenomenon on May 11, 2022
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