Analysis of L-Lee

W. Wessels 1970 (Carletonville)



you were on the carpet
smelling of
your family's
wild sad history
that wilting light blue dress
you wore
a fake summer patch
across your waist
spilling around
us
I noticed your eyes
now a strange green
entering me


Scheme ABCDEFGHIJKLD
Poetic Form
Metre 101010 101 1100 11100 110111 11 01101 0111 1001 1 11011 1011 1001
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 213
Words 39
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 13
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 13
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 174
Words per stanza (avg) 39

About this poem

Something I just remembered

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Written on May 11, 2022

Submitted by wp.wessels70 on May 11, 2022

Modified on March 23, 2023

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