Analysis of Life



Life
In life we make choices to do certain
things.
But in reality we lose our voices to
make statements of what is true,
We stress over those you want to be
you.
In life we strive to be the best ever
but in reality we lose focus for we
think we have the answer to everything.
In the depth of your heart you know that
it longs to be touched by feelings that can’t
explain why.
In our minds we think that if we humble
down that a man/woman will accept us.
Truth is nothing or no one should dictate
yours thoughts, your decisions, your rights
to do what is best for your life.
We as flesh tends to follow and not lead.
We let others steal our identities and rely
on them to control our journeys.
In life we try to make rational incisions that
stops the pain from being envision that their
what we desire.
In the minds of our significant others they
know that we will love them unconditionally
even though they deceive thee to be false.
At what cost of your life will you pay
just to stay with someone whom walks
over you without a care in the world?
How many tears will you cry before you
try and take back a life that God gave and
flesh refrain to destroy.
If you were meant to be then you wouldn’t
go through so many disappointments when
one fail.
Who is truly the blame when we let our frame
go limp and refuse to refresh after all is lost?
What can you do if you choose to lay around
as your mate continue to take advantage of
what’s been promised to you.
Who’s really the fool and how many times
shall you lose yourself before you wake up?
What is it for a man to gain the whole world,
but in the process lose his soul.
What is deemed for you to have will not cause
you pain, misery, doubt, or arguments, abuse
or worry.
In life we make choices which one will you make?
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Poetic Form Tetractys  (24%)
Etheree  (20%)
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Characters 1,811
Words 382
Sentences 20
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 50
Lines Amount 50
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 1,409
Words per stanza (avg) 353

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Understanding how life can be..

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Written on February 16, 2022

Submitted by MzShazPoeticzLove on April 26, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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