Analysis of Fractured promises and mended hearts



You whisper in my ear
Your faint breath caressing my body
It's inching my every pore
You silence my doubt
I cannot contain myself
When in your presence
Our love flows like water
And is rich like soil
You have me entangled in your web
A web you've woven so methodically
Im trapped
Im forgotten
Come for me
Consume me
My patience runs thin
Slowly, day-to-day
Im losing myself without you


Scheme ABCDEFGHIBJKBBLMN
Poetic Form
Metre 110011 111010110 11011001 11011 110011 10110 1011110 01111 111010011 01110101000 11 1010 111 011 11011 10111 1101011
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 390
Words 76
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 17
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 310
Words per stanza (avg) 71

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Written on June 22, 2021

Submitted by aprivera1432 on May 07, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Antonius

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