Analysis of Fractured promises and mended hearts
You whisper in my ear
Your faint breath caressing my body
It's inching my every pore
You silence my doubt
I cannot contain myself
When in your presence
Our love flows like water
And is rich like soil
You have me entangled in your web
A web you've woven so methodically
Im trapped
Im forgotten
Come for me
Consume me
My patience runs thin
Slowly, day-to-day
Im losing myself without you
Scheme | ABCDEFGHIBJKBBLMN |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 110011 111010110 11011001 11011 110011 10110 1011110 01111 111010011 01110101000 11 1010 111 011 11011 10111 1101011 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 390 |
Words | 76 |
Sentences | 1 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 17 |
Lines Amount | 17 |
Letters per line (avg) | 18 |
Words per line (avg) | 4 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 310 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 71 |
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Easy come, easy go... I suppose...
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Written on June 22, 2021
Submitted by aprivera1432 on May 07, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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