Analysis of The Sky’s Blue and I Miss You



The sky’s blue and
I miss you
I write my thoughts when I’m alone, and they keep coming back to you.
Earlier today I caught myself scrolling through the photos of you.
I froze, remembering the first time I surprised you with a rose.
You told me they were your favorite.
I couldn’t help but smile at this memory.
I hope you really do remember me.
The real me.
The me that loves your energy.
That loves your smile.
That loves you for who you are.
You’ve come so far.
Just look there you are,
smiling with your whole heart,
brighter than any star.
Sometimes you may cry,
with tears in your eye
remember my words,
My calm voice.
a babies lullaby.
I can’t say goodbye, and you ask why?
If I died right now my brain would replay every memory,
through my sensory, and there you would be.
Replaying the first time I met you.
Cold with no shoes
and that’s something I refuse to lose.


Scheme ABBBCDEEEEFGGGHGIIJKIIEEBLL
Poetic Form
Metre 0110 111 1111110101110111 10001111110111 1101000111011101 111101100 1111111100 1111010101 011 01111100 1111 1111111 1111 11111 101111 101101 01111 11011 01011 111 01010 11110111 1111111101100100 1110001111 010011111 1111 011010111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 891
Words 192
Sentences 18
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 27
Lines Amount 27
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 674
Words per stanza (avg) 167
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Written on April 28, 2022

Submitted by Whereisiverson on April 29, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Iverson Taylor Smith

My name is Iverson is named after Allen Iverson. I'm new to poetry which my girlfriend introduced me to but each thing I write comes from the soul. Let me know how it feels to read my poetry. more…

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