Analysis of don’t remember



I still remember your favourite colour
it was green
I attached that memory to nature,
like grass, and trees, and the stems of the flowers
now whenever I step outside,
I'm reminded of you.
do you remember my favourite colour?
I still remember your family very fondly
I remember your father
and the way he would never show up for you like you always hoped he would
I remember each night you cried over him
and your let down heart
do you remember any of my trauma?
I still remember how you broke up with me,
and I still remember how easily the words had slipped
out of your mouth.
do you remember the way I reacted in that moment?
and how it felt I was drowning?
do you even remember anything about me?


Scheme ABACDEAFAGHIJFKLMNF
Poetic Form
Metre 11010111 111 1011100110 11010011010 10101111 101011 11010111 1101011001010 1010110 00111101111111111 10101111101 01111 11010101110 11010111111 01101011000111 1111 110100110100110 01111110 111001010011
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 703
Words 146
Sentences 7
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 19
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 553
Words per stanza (avg) 134
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Submitted by jaxonhurst on April 26, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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