Analysis of crime of mine



oh what to do with these morbid thoughts that taunt me while i sleep
well what do i do tell me when they’re telling me to weep
they eat me, day and night even when i sneak
they don't care if i live or die only that i am me
only that i am me they care that is the crime of mine
and i hear as they sentence
                                sentence me to die


Scheme AABCDEF
Poetic Form
Metre 111111101111111 11111111110111 11110110111 11111111101111 10111111110111 0111110 10111
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 358
Words 74
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 7
Lines Amount 7
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 248
Words per stanza (avg) 73

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Submitted by morbidreads on April 15, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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