Analysis of A Road Less Traveled



There was a time,
It was many years ago,
I found myself hitchhiking,
Down a lonesome, barren road.

This long desert highway,
Was so desolate in fact,
That days went by,
Before I saw the first car pass.

Indifference was the name,
Of the long-haul driver who stopped.
Thankful for the rescue,
But somehow still feeling lost.

I told him my life’s story,
The heartbreak, the trauma, the pain.
He seemed to have cared less,
Nonchalantly swerving between lanes.

He said “kindness is overrated,
You’ll always end up getting hurt,
So forget about everyone else,
And always put yourself first.”

I stepped down from his truck,
Thanked him for the ride,
I contemplated his words,
Somehow knowing they were unwise.

I continued on my journey,
Many more days had passed,
Without having a drop of water,
Or seeing a single blade of grass.

Then I heard in the distance,
The sounds of a car,
I prayed for the driver to stop,
Knowing I couldn’t make it far.

He came to a screeching halt,
The door opened to let me in,
He introduced himself as Malevolence,
As he met me with a sardonic grin.

I had an uneasy feeling,
But I knew I would die without his aid.
He could sense my reluctance, I guess;
He said I had no reason to be afraid.

Sensing a weight on my shoulders,
He inquired about my problems,
I told him my story and he said,
“That’s something I can help you in solving.”

He said I should harness my anger,
And always aim to get even.
Revenge is the sweetest fruit,
And blood is the best reward given.

I began to make a list,
Of all the people I should go kill,
But I became despondent and knew,
This wasn’t the proper way to heal.

I said “stop the car now”,
And he replied with a chilling quip,
“No one will save you on this road,
You will end up dead in a ditch.”

I knew that death on this road,
Was a very distinct possibility,
But I knew if I stayed with this man,
My soul would be damaged, irreparably.

I kept on struggling down that road,
Knowing good and well my inevitable fate,
But my one goal before The End,
Was to clear my heart of anger and hate.

The moment finally came,
I was face down in the sand,
Only a few breaths and heartbeats left,
Until I finally met my end.

And as if she came out of nowhere,
An angelic woman appeared,
She put me in her car and began speaking,
But at first I was unable to hear.

After receiving food and water,
I regained consciousness and asked her name.
She told me she was called Benevolence,
Then I asked why it was me that she saved.

She said very simply,
“Because you needed some help,
And I was in a position to do so;
I’ve seen troubled times myself.”

She could feel the burdens I carried.
She told me the key to a life well-lived,
Are the acts of forgiveness and love,
Which cost nothing — they’re free to give.

And as I thought about all those people,
Who had hurt me and caused me pain,
I realized that by showing them kindness,
I was the one who had so much to gain.

Then she told me she would take me,
As far as I wanted to go,
She would be there with me...for me,
For the rest of my journey home.


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Poetic Form Quatrain  (26%)
Metre 1101 1110101 11110 1010101 11101 1110001 1111 01110111 0100101 10111011 101010 111101 1111110 0101001 111111 10101011 11101010 1111101 10101101 011011 111111 11101 110011 1101001 10101110 101111 011001110 110010111 1110010 01101 11101011 1011111 1110101 01101110 1010111 1111100101 11101010 1111110111 111101011 11111101101 10011110 101001110 111110011 1101111010 111110110 0111110 0110101 011010110 1011101 110101111 110101001 11010111 111011 010110101 11111111 11111001 1111111 1010010100 111111111 11111001000 111100111 101011010001 11110101 1111111001 0101001 1111001 10011011 011100111 01111111 1101001 11100100110 1111101011 100101010 1011000101 1111110100 1111111111 111010 0111011 01100010111 111011 111010110 1110110111 101101001 11101111 0111011110 11110111 1101110110 1101111111 11111111 11111011 1111111 10111101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 3,097
Words 700
Sentences 30
Stanzas 23
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 92
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 101
Words per stanza (avg) 25
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Written on March 16, 2022

Submitted by sethhayneswarner on March 30, 2022

Modified on April 24, 2023

3:30 min read
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Seth Haynes Warner

Seth is an Iraq War veteran, having served as an Infantryman in both the US Marine Corps and the US Army. He started writing in December 2021 as a form of therapy. He spends most of his free time with his children and on mountaintops. more…

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