Analysis of Locomotive



It’s like you’re on a train
But you don’t know where you are supposed to get off.

Every stop passed feels like a lifetime missed
And it’s all your fault because you’re too busy thinking
About the final destination, the untimely termination
Of this train that won’t fucking slow down I mean Jesus
The chugs of the pistons only get louder
The billows of smoke grow darker and darker
So that every mile you have to look harder
Out of the window until you’d rather just
Jam your fingers between the doors and
Wrench them open,
Launching onto an un-real platform with a splat.
Out of the train your own terms.
God, you’d think to yourself, that would be terribly dramatic.

So you just sit there soaking
All of it up like a wet sponge on the verge on rot,
Too stubborn to ask anyone—


Scheme XX XABXCCCXXBXXX AXB
Poetic Form
Metre 111101 111111101111 1001111011 0111101111010 0101001000100010 1111110111110 01101010110 01011110010 111001111110 11010011101 111001010 1110 10101111101 1101111 111101111100010 1111110 1111101110111 1101110
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 799
Words 155
Sentences 5
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 2, 13, 3
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 205
Words per stanza (avg) 48

About this poem

contemplations from during an extremely dull school lesson.

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Written on June 02, 2022

Submitted on March 30, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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