Analysis of Untitled



As the unspoken truths unfurl,
the ever hollowness inside continues echoing.
Inside this painful silence, I am reborn.
And as I turn into the darkness, I realize: it is so mellowing.

Trembling the silence of the dark abyss.
And in the darkness, there may be space to rest.
Defy what's left, for I have earned my leave.
I'll leave this crest of mine and no one else.

And after my descent into oblivion to mellow lullabies,
I'm greeted by a shadow of the night.
Beneath a smile unsettling and bleary eyes,
I sense relief. Abyss has finally turned bright.


Scheme XAXA XXXX BCBC
Poetic Form Quatrain  (67%)
Metre 10010101 010101010100 01110101111 011101010110111100 10001010101 00010111111 0111111111 1111110111 01010101010011010 110101101 010101000101 110101110011
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 574
Words 117
Sentences 10
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 36
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 144
Words per stanza (avg) 33

About this poem

A piece from a collection of eight poems.

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Written on November 23, 2019

Submitted by numbulose on March 13, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Suleyman Liakhor

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