Analysis of Tears



A poem by James Nemecek.....

Shouts in anger
A door is slammed
Faces hot and trembling

Begging, pleading, A fleeting touch
She turns away
Misunderstanding and lies

Feeling hopeless, wanting
A child's curious, nervous face
No way to explain

Undying love, Till death do us part!
She falls, He falls
A child loses a father, A child loses a mother
Hearts are shattered


Scheme X AXB XXX BXX XXAX
Poetic Form
Metre 01011100 1010 0111 1010100 10100101 1101 001001 101010 01100101 11101 010111111 1111 01100100110010 1110
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 449
Words 78
Sentences 3
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 1, 3, 3, 3, 4
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 58
Words per stanza (avg) 13

About this poem

This poem tells the true story of a family torn apart by a misunderstanding and the loss that everyone feels.

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Written on February 25, 2022

Submitted on February 27, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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James Nemecek

I wound not call myself a poet. In fact I have only written very few poems ever throughout my life. I have found that when I find myself in hard times and feeling low I hear words to express the feelings in side and they just come out. Would love to hear feed back about what people who know more about poetry then myself think of the work I've done. Please enjoy and I hope you are able to visually see the scene play out in your mind as you read my heart felt words. more…

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