Analysis of 4am thoughts
I wake up in d middle of d nyt
Wondering y u still by my side
I stay up thinking hard
How did I become such a retard
I know wat I want & need
And yet I feel like I've lost my creed!
The things I keep to myself
I can't even begin to count off of the shelf
The tears, the scars, the pain
Will be all that I'll have in remains
Being tired isn't enough
Cuz life never stops getting rough
My skin crawls with disgust
My flesh screams at life's harsh thrust
My bones screech with exhaustion
My veins are pinched with confusion
My body isn't mine anymore
And my mind is always sore!
The life I imagined growing up
Is the exact one I'm tearing up
I can't stop myself from loving you
And I can't stop u from doing you
I live for mines and those around me
And still try to stay on 2 feet for me
I know i can't do it all on my own
But I won't stop trying til I'm blown
I'm drowning but still floating
I'm suffering but I'm still coping
I'm dying but still breathing
I'm hurting but I'm still fighting
Soon it'll be all worth it
My time will be over with
My kids will look up to me
And say that's "My Mommy"
I'll have lived my life to the fullest
And my kids will have no worries nonetheless!
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 1110110111 100111111 111101 111011001 111111 011111111 011111 111001111101 010101 111111001 10101001 11101101 111101 1111111 1111010 11111010 11010101 011111 011010101 100111101 11111101 011111101 111101011 011111111 1111111111 111110111 1101110 110011110 1101110 11011110 1101111 1111101 1111111 011110 111111010 0111111001 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 1,190 |
Words | 256 |
Sentences | 3 |
Stanzas | 6 |
Stanza Lengths | 6, 6, 6, 6, 6, 6 |
Lines Amount | 36 |
Letters per line (avg) | 25 |
Words per line (avg) | 7 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 151 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 41 |
About this poem
Just thoughts in writing
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Written on February 21, 2022
Submitted by doriezekias on February 21, 2022
Modified on March 24, 2023
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