Analysis of Thunder

Kamino 1983 (New York)



Thunder envelops me wakening long dormant parts of my body and brain. My eyes stretch open, scanning the sky hoping to see the neon crack. They find nothing, they are too late, for the sound always comes after the light.

But then I witness a new electric vein extend from the ether to the earth. It sears my eyes. And then the thunder, like the crack of a weep, except deep as if the sound is a bellow from the earth itself. My hair stands on end but I'm not afraid. I feel Alive. Awakened. Electric. As if the energy from the sky traveled down to the earth and from the earth up through my feet penetrating my body and imbuing me with that etheric magnificence reminding me that I am not just ON the earth but I am OF the earth and in it.


Scheme X X
Poetic Form
Metre 100101111011110011111010011011010111101111101111001 11110010101011010101111101010101101011110110101010111111111011101010010110100101101101010111111001100111111010111111101111101001
Characters 740
Words 147
Sentences 11
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 1, 1
Lines Amount 2
Letters per line (avg) 289
Words per line (avg) 73
Letters per stanza (avg) 289
Words per stanza (avg) 73

About this poem

Written in Coconut Grove, Miami on a Sunday, 2/13/22.

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Written on February 13, 2022

Submitted on February 13, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Kamino

I am a new poet influenced by phenomenology, trying to convey exigency in re-establishing our connection with the material, ever-changing Earth. more…

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