Analysis of Symmetry

Landyn James Lewis 1991 (Massachusetts)



Paved path of greystone,
underneath a distant sky,
catching my eye,
& seeking escape,

surrounded by symmetry,
one and the same,
Life is still—

Reflection of the Summer's sun,
river's run,
drowning the World,

certain,
Time breathes,

As I roam inside my mind,
underneath: the distant sky,
Life catches my eye,
I'm seeking escape,

Shadow bird,
surrounded by symmetry,
we are one and the same,

the World is still—
Reflecting in the Summer's sun.

By: Landyn James Lewis
Copyright © 2020


Scheme xaab Cde ffx fx xaab xCd ef xx
Poetic Form
Metre 1111 010101 1011 1001 0101100 1001 111 01010101 101 1001 10 11 1110111 010101 11011 11001 11 0101100 111001 0111 01000101 11110 10
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 543
Words 109
Sentences 2
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 4, 3, 3, 2, 4, 3, 2, 2
Lines Amount 23
Letters per line (avg) 16
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 47
Words per stanza (avg) 10

About this poem

I wrote this poem while sitting in Central Park across from the Frederick Douglass sculpture & I was very inspired to write something different than my normal poems (subject, POV, dynamics, structure, beat/rhythm, etc.) When I was finished, I was proud of what I was able to accomplish. I want people to see what I was experiencing that day, and I am visually impaired as well as hard of hearing. I want to show people my perception, how I see the world & the only way for me to express my view of the world seems to be through my poetry. I want people to take away peace, center, symmetry, solitude, thoughtful simplicity & a gaining of the beauty in life that is for all of us; the life that is out there, waiting. 

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Written on 2020

Submitted by lgd1226nyc on January 10, 2022

Modified on April 22, 2023

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Landyn James Lewis

Who I Am: A 30-year-old, self-made Weird-O. Landyn James Lewis is my pen name. Birth Name is Louis...most people know me as Louie. What I Am: Writer (creative Poetry). Audio/Visual artist. Romantic New Yorker. Spiritualist. Lover, not a fighter. When I Am: While not talking. While sleep walking. While I'm surrounded by the World. While I'm alone. Where I Am: Here, and out of bed. There, wherever that may be. Why I Am: The Divine Universe... How I Am: Que Sera, Sera. more…

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