Analysis of Brunescence



My lens is now Brunescent,
My sight is less than excellent.
Through age and UV damage,
My adult and fetal nuclei manage
To lose glutathione's protection.
No amount of refractive correction
Can aid my thickening lens,
from needing a thorough chromophore cleanse.
Yes, worse than Deturgescence
is this brown, blue-blocking Brunescence


Scheme AABBCCDDDD
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 11111 11111100 110110 1010101010 111010 1011010010 1111001 11001011 1111 1111101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 332
Words 57
Sentences 4
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 10
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 272
Words per stanza (avg) 51

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A story of love and loss of vision. More Yellow, More Problems

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Submitted by josh_r on February 07, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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