Analysis of Rejected

Jodiann Edwards 1986 (Jamaica)



I looked at you with fire burning in my eyes. The thought of your touch lingers in my mind. Your smell hugging tight at nights. Do you know me? Do you know that we belong? My mind keeps playing tricks on me. Why don't you see me? Am I not good enough? Am standing right here, my arms stretched out, please embrace me..feel me, am longing for your touch, hold me tight, hold me please, never let go. Am tired of feeling alone, Am tired of feeling rejected. I want to love can you love me?


Scheme A
Poetic Form
Metre 111111010011011111001111101111111111110111110111111111111011101111111011111011111111110111101100111011001011111111
Characters 487
Words 97
Sentences 12
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 1
Lines Amount 1
Letters per line (avg) 371
Words per line (avg) 96
Letters per stanza (avg) 371
Words per stanza (avg) 96

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My personal feelings

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Written on January 26, 2022

Submitted by Edwardsjodi13 on January 26, 2022

Modified on April 19, 2023

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