Analysis of The Missing Jacket




Once had a very good close caring friend
I thought the great times would never end

My boyfriend and I visited him habitually everyday
For many movies we watched, and games we’d play

One night my boyfriend left his gray jacket, I went to retrieve it so he wouldn’t worry

I returned to our friends to pick it up, have a short visit so I could leave in a hurry

When I arrived my good friend was acting very odd, very strange
I gave him a big hug and I could feel in him, there was a change

This wasn’t like him, and I felt in my mind I should leave
He seemed out of character , and I felt of doom and grief

We visited in his garage, which was also not normal
It was just an unannounced trip, it wasn’t to be formal

I noticed when I stepped in all this red paint he had spilled on the floor and ceiling
My thoughts of dread and darkness, I had stumbled in on was quite a scary feeling

As we were talking, he started slowly pulling down each blind.
I felt like I was a trapped animal, but I kept quiet in my mind

Soon, I heard a noise like a crying cat behind boxes, and I heard something fall
He said it was his cat that was playing nothing to worry about, wasn’t anything at all.

I cleared my voice and then said all of a sudden, well I must go soon
That my boyfriend was waiting for me, and it was almost noon.

He said you’re right, I know how he gets when you’re not on time  
I gave him a hug and hurriedly left, didn’t want to impose on his chime.

I left quickly without the gray jacket, and I really didn’t care
Just wanted to leave, there no more words for me to share

Two days later we read in the paper with fear
Our friend was arrested, that had been so dear

He was arrested for murder and rape
The fear of reading this we could not escape

Fearing we’d soon be contacted by the authorities
We didn’t talk about this to anyone, it was a priority

No one ever contacted us, and we were quite relieved
This is the story that my grand-kids will never believe.

I always wondered if I had disturbed him that day
And if I could have been next, if I decided to stay

Many years later, I will never tell exactly
Just glad that it’s over and I feel quite lucky


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Poetic Form
Metre 1101011101 110111101 1101100101000101 11010110111 11111111011101111110 101110111111011011110010 1101111110101101 1110110111011101 1111011011111 11111000111101 110001011110110 1111011111110 11011101111111101010 11110101110011101010 110101101010111 111110110011110011 11101101010110011101 1111111110101100111011 11110111101011111 1111101101111 11111111111111 111010100111101111 1110010110011011 1101111111111 111011001011 101101011111 1101011001 01110111101 1011110100100 1110111101100100 1110101010101 11010111111001 111011101111 0111111111011 1011011101010 111110011110
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 2,197
Words 457
Sentences 6
Stanzas 19
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 1, 1, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 36
Letters per line (avg) 47
Words per line (avg) 12
Letters per stanza (avg) 88
Words per stanza (avg) 23

About this poem

True story about a scary experience in my past

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Submitted on January 23, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Cynthia Long

I have a copyright at the Library of Congress and am the author of Memories of My Grandfather. I am a college graduate with a degree in Library Science and a two-time former Deans list student. I love to preserve history, and have cleaned grave stones, helped others with preparing their family genealogies to donate to the public library. Have attended an excavation in Connersville, Indiana on President Lincoln's former cabinet member, Caleb Blood Smith. I have an Indiana History book about the Caleb Smith excavation with consent to excavate papers at the I.U. Library Stacks in Bloomington, Indiana. I've had a poem called "Fall" published in the IVY TECH literary Magazine. I was chosen as "editors pick" for one of my stories "Thanksgiving" at former web page called Open Salon. I collect and have over 1000 hand-written letters from a lady in Nebo about her life and I save them on ancestry. more…

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