Analysis of Deep Feelings



You haunt me
you're in my head
you haunt me
I feel so dead
I wish this pain would fade
you haunt me
the visions of you scare me
yours supposed to be dead
in my head in my head in my  head
you were dead
pain and frustration
bloodshed  regret
how I feel when I see you
is mine to the bloodshed
you are dead


Scheme AbAbcAabbbdefbb
Poetic Form Tetractys  (47%)
Metre 111 1011 111 1111 111111 111 0101111 101111 011011011 101 10010 101 1111111 11101 111
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 309
Words 70
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 15
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 16
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 236
Words per stanza (avg) 68

About this poem

Traumatic past between break up and heartache, a child horrible feelings in a rough time.

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Written on January 22, 2022

Submitted by DiamondDayz on January 22, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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