Analysis of Disheveled Levels

Lawrence S. Pertillar 1947 (Connecticut)



Massive.
Interactive,
Distracting attractions.
Trending.
Like a fashionable fad.
As...
A sad growing must to have!

Disheveled levels of upheaval.
Dropping from the top.
Has many people seething evil.
As if they can not stop,
These levels shifting quick.
Feeding minds to make them sick.
And seek they do to blame everyone else.
But not themselves.
For designing and promoting,
To permit every stitch...
Of this sickening evil wickedness.

Disheveled levels of upheaval.
Crumbling to the ground.
Created by a few provoking,
Conflicts all around.
And those recruited to be culprits?
Show themselves fully clothed to expose,
To have cut their noses done to do...
For the purpose to be proud,
Of being puppets used to abuse.

From head to toe.
Effective are these disheveled levels.
Maximized to grow.
With a keeping,
All thoughtless people blind.
Until the truth to find it,
Makes them lose their minds.
And left behind they will be...
Tossed aside while they come to agree,
The only worth they have to humanity...
Is to remain commodities to amuse,
Those investing their time and money too.
Being entertained by the ones,
With smiling faces fixed.
Proving they have been,
Stripped of minds and consciousness!

Massive.
Interactive.
Distracting attractions trending.
Like a fashionable must have fad.
Although sad,
Is this growing to accept and approved...
MADNESS!

Disheveled are these levels of upheaval.
And kept...
To keep them maximized.
Disheveled are these levels of upheaval.
And meant...
To keep them maximized.
Yes!
To keep them maximized.
And address...
All of the mess.
Yes!

Disheveled are the levels of upheaval,
And kept...
Meant.
To keep them maximized.
Yes!
To keep them maximized.
Yes!
To blind minds and eyes.
Who have progressed the process,
Of all of the mess.
Yes!
To keep them maximizing,
The mess.
Yes!
But to claim themselves,
Among the blessed!
Yes.
Oh, yes!


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Poetic Form
Metre 10 010 010010 10 1010001 1 0110111 010101010 10101 110101010 111111 110101 1011111 011111101 1101 10100010 1011001 1110010100 010101010 100101 010101010 01101 010101110 101101101 111110111 1010111 110101101 1111 0101101010 1011 1010 110101 0101111 11111 0101111 101111101 01011110100 11010100101 1010110101 1001101 110101 10111 1110100 10 010 01001010 101000111 11 1110101001 10 01011101010 01 11110 01011101010 01 11110 1 11110 01 1101 1 01010101010 01 1 11110 1 11110 1 11101 110101 11101 1 111100 01 1 11101 0101 1 11
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,883
Words 391
Sentences 62
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 7, 11, 9, 16, 7, 11, 18
Lines Amount 79
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 210
Words per stanza (avg) 44
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Submitted by lpahtillah on January 22, 2022

Modified by lpahtillah on January 22, 2022

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