Analysis of loneliness - oh, loneliness

Markus Kiener 1960 (Regensdorf)



loneliness - oh, loneliness
why is your world my only thoughtfullness
don't you know or can't you see
that your kind of freedom is in fact prison to me

loneliness - oh, loneliness
now you have heard I long for togetherness
so come and see and set me free
from your prison where I am but I don't wish to be

I knoe it isn't your duty
to lend a helping hand
but I'm sure you will have some pity
when you try to feel my stand

loneliness - oh, loneliness
isn't it foolish to speak of our helplessness
though we know and we can see
is our inabilty to act sometimes the only way to be


Scheme Aabb Aabb bcbc Aabb
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 1001100 11111101 1111111 1111101011011 1001100 11111110100 11010111 1110111111111 11110110 110101 111111110 1111111 1001100 1011011110100 1110111 11011101010111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 581
Words 121
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 112
Words per stanza (avg) 29
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Written on October 12, 2002

Submitted by Kimi on January 02, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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