Analysis of The Quite Place

Gil B. 1994 (Sorsogon)



The wind is blowing with passion and care.
The land is busy with their barefoot and tires.
The river is calm with no worries to bare.
As I see you this afternoon with a great smile you wear.

My mind is struggling with lots of fear…
Life is you without the feelings of breaking.
So much worries to think of what will happen again.
I’m trying my best to uplift myself, remembering how to live again.


Scheme AXAA XXBB
Poetic Form Quatrain  (50%)
Metre 0111011001 01110111010 01011111011 1111101101111 1111001111 11101010110 1110111111001 110111101010011101
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 404
Words 85
Sentences 8
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 4, 4
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 39
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 156
Words per stanza (avg) 38

About this poem

This is about my people at Donsol, Sorsogon, Philippines.

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Written on December 31, 2021

Submitted by gil_matrix on December 29, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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