Analysis of Who feels it knows it



elders please give me my chance so I can tell those ones who got the chance to be at the top who were lucky to climb to the top and taking this chance as it was their wisdom they started suppressing those below them they started spitting on those below them beating their chest with pride. l say no , here clever people you've lost it .

if you were born like everyone else, if you dropped your navel like everyone else. excuse me all  those who dwell on this earth don't fool yourself entertaining yourself with lies don't cheat yourself bossing over everything don't cheat yourself championing everyone

those you oppress
those you suppress
their crying are powerful prayers to the heavens and one knows the reply nor the day it will come

if it was me setting there
if it was me there
l would shout calling my kinsmen
A meal has been prepared here chrestars come all come and feast
whatever you got eat with your folks

if there is something you've kept for me father please may l have my share while still alive
lord look, lm being worm out like a clothe by those with money while l've nothing. my heart hates that all the time l'm the one being slaved why lord

if it is possible lord, can you have a meeting with your angels and blow us some blessings for the poor people

my mother wants to thank me me but she nolonger know to chant my totem what can l give her so that she can thank me

A tooth is came chrestars
they will smile at me as if they like me but inside burning to see me eating gravy
they like seeing me wearing rags
they want me to lead a life of begging
they are evil and only wanted themselves to eat


Scheme X A BBX CCAXX XX X D BDXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 1011111111111110111101101011101010111111101100101011110101101110111111111010111 1101110111111011010111111111110101001111101110101101100010 1101 1101 110110011010011001101111 1111101 11111 1111011 0111011111101 10111111 111101111101111111101 111101110111110111101111101110110111 1111001111010111001111010110 1101111111111111011110111111 01111 1111111111101101111010 11101101 1111101110 1110010100111
Characters 1,636
Words 330
Sentences 5
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 3, 5, 2, 1, 1, 5
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 68
Words per line (avg) 17
Letters per stanza (avg) 161
Words per stanza (avg) 39
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Written on August 22, 2019

Submitted by obammarbarrier on December 23, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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