Analysis of Complete

A.D. Small 1987 (Indiana)



As she lays down on the sidewalk with her eyes made of stone
As she lays down she is not alone
Lift a hand to cup her cheek
Let her words caress you as you speak
Speak slowly no lies
Can u imagine being broken with no ties
To have your heart lying on the floor
Not being able to speak until someone opened the door
You picked me up off the ground
Off the cold hard concrete
Your heartbeat the only sound
Your voice so sweet
You made me want too breathe again
You made me want to talk
You made me laugh within
You made me dance and walk
Without you I'd be empty
A lifeless vessel beyond repair
I would have no meaning
I would not care
So to you i give my love
Beyond a reason of doubt
Your heart fits mine like a glove
You make me want to scream and shout
Jerry you hold my heart and soul
I was broken when i met you
You make me utterly whole
And i can't wait to say i do

A.D. Small
July 18, 2014


Scheme AABBCCDDEFEFXGXGXHXHIJIJKLKL XX
Poetic Form Etheree  (37%)
Tetractys  (23%)
Metre 1111101101111 111111101 1011101 101011111 11011 110101010111 111110101 11010110111001 1111101 101101 110101 1111 11111101 111111 111101 111101 0111110 010100101 111110 1111 1111111 0101011 1111101 11111101 10111101 11101111 1111001 01111111 11 1
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 907
Words 193
Sentences 3
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 28, 2
Lines Amount 30
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 351
Words per stanza (avg) 95
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Modified on March 05, 2023

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