Analysis of Meltdown



The bars of the jail
those electronics we serve
our cellphones and laptops
new wardens in stir

Ipods and Ipads
to Tweet and I.M.
the virtual distance
created within

24/7
we Text back and forth
when Email’s too slow
 a much faster course

But nature is watching
and planning a storm
the power grid wanton
with darkness for sure

And who is to blame
as we cry and we scream
our minds have been sentenced
we no longer dream

The reckoning promised
has come home at last
and this time not virtual
—our prison recast

(Dreamsleep: December, 2021)


Scheme XXAB AXXX XXXX XXXX XCXC XDXD B
Poetic Form Tetractys  (28%)
Metre 01101 101011 10101 11001 101 1101 010010 01001 1 11101 10111 01101 110110 01001 010110 11011 01111 111011 1011110 11101 010010 11111 0111100 101001 1010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 550
Words 107
Sentences 3
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 61
Words per stanza (avg) 14
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Modified by sage48 on December 18, 2021

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Kurt Philip Behm

Longtime writer with twelve books in publication. Three of them Poetry. : The Death Of The Playground : The Sword Of Ichiban : Searching For Crazy Horse : Darkening Sun : An Anthology Of Perception-Vol's 1 & 2 : After Midnight : Sammy And Bumpers : The Fall City Mandate : Revenge Along The War Trail : Death from The Sky more…

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