Analysis of ~+Sharithey+~

Skyte 1989 (Moscow)



Rainy days remind me of
Sorrow that became the love
Slowly making possible
Dreaming and that stuff
I ignore somehow
That it's over now
Ripped off wings and broken halos
My evil power became my crown

Is this the end?
Will I defend?
Or will I lie and just pretend?
Is this the truth?
Can I get through?
Or is this world really that cruel?

I will deny
That because of me the angels cry
'Cause I faced on these days
That I'll never reach their grace
'Cause they feel my cold
And that I'm the weight of the world
Never gonna hold
What I've been ever told

I don't know who I should be
Evil ghost or lightful queen
I know my feelings cannot suffer
But God, please try to set me free
God, who am I in this tale?
Always fight, forever failed
God, what is the sense of living?
Oh, I want so much to be just hale...

And I will deny
That I definitely will die
With those burdens and that curse
Yes, I carry all the worst
Kill me, I'm the sacrifice
But my life has a higher price
Please, forgive me, if I miss
Just to understand all this.

...to be continued...


Scheme AABXCCXX DDDXXB EEXXFXFF GXXGHXXH EEXXIIJJ X
Poetic Form
Metre 1010111 1010101 1010100 10011 1011 11101 11101010 110100111 1101 1101 11110101 1101 1111 111110110 1101 101110101 111111 1110111 11111 01101101 10101 111101 1111111 101111 111101010 11111111 1111011 110101 11101110 111111111 01101 11100011 1110011 1110101 111010 11110101 1011111 110111 11010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,053
Words 223
Sentences 13
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 8, 6, 8, 8, 8, 1
Lines Amount 39
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 134
Words per stanza (avg) 35

About this poem

I called the collection of some poems from my life in the shadows "Sharithey". Dunno exactly why, but let's be creative! :-D I hope they are cool...

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Written on December 12, 2021

Submitted by Skyte on December 12, 2021

Modified by Skyte on December 12, 2021

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