Analysis of Problematic camp
I miss you so much
I open the phone
To see fucking nothing
Nothing at all
At times I feel lonely
(With)'Out you by my side
Now it's just me, me and me only.
The boredom of myself that I was trying to fight
Did not win the battle, I picked the wrong side,
Sometimes I feel like yelling and tight,
Tight I cleanse my hand in anger and sadness, alright?
I know I did some things and I'm sorry about it,
But sometimes I doubt it,
I doubt what I do, what I feel like I knew,
And I know it's anxiety playing in through ,
Cannot really help it,
Not even myself ,
The happiness, sweetness and feeling of love,
Emotions are the only that're true,
We do have our hiccups , we do and I felt that,
All though I still love you,
And feel like forever,
Forever and ever I'll love you forever.
Right now tho, the feeling of loneliness only,
Has hit me inside into writing this poem,
It might be bit bad and well not constructed ,
But its come from my mind,
And its not that instructed.
Scheme | XXXX ABACBCC DDEEDXXEXEFF AXGXG |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 11111 11001 111010 1011 111110 111111 111110110 010111111011 11101011011 011111001 111110100101 1111110110011 101111 11111111111 011101001001 101011 1101 01001001011 0101010111 1111010110111 111111 011010 010010111010 111010110010 111010110110 11111011010 111111 0111010 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 975 |
Words | 215 |
Sentences | 4 |
Stanzas | 4 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 7, 12, 5 |
Lines Amount | 28 |
Letters per line (avg) | 26 |
Words per line (avg) | 7 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 185 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 49 |
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