Analysis of Broken



Broken is how I feel not knowing
If my heart will ever heal .

He Broke me apart that is what he wanted to do
He got his way and beat me till I was black and blue.

Now iam laying in the hospital
Not knowing what to do.

I pray to god everyday wishing
This will all just go away.

Broken and sad Awayls crying
Sometimes wishing I wasn't
hear so all this pain will disappear.

Broken and abused and all so used.


Scheme AX BB XB AX AXX X
Poetic Form
Metre 101111110 1111101 1110111111011 1111011111101 11100010 110111 111110110 1111101 1001110 0110110 11111101 100010111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 415
Words 98
Sentences 7
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 3, 1
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 53
Words per stanza (avg) 14

About this poem

I have had a horrible life with an ex boyfriend who was way older then me . abused badly to where I lost my baby and I was put in hospital myself. I Awayls thought what he told me was I was like hes Awayls told me I was ugly, worthless, I was was of life.

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Written on November 24, 2021

Submitted by gwen_g on November 24, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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