Analysis of Moon Fishing

Lisel Mueller 1924 (Hamburg) – 2020 (Chicago)



When the moon was full they came to the water.
some with pitchforks, some with rakes,
some with sieves and ladles,
and one with a silver cup.

And they fished til a traveler passed them and said,
"Fools,
to catch the moon you must let your women
spread their hair on the water --
even the wily moon will leap to that bobbing
net of shimmering threads,
gasp and flop till its silver scales
lie black and still at your feet."

And they fished with the hair of their women
till a traveler passed them and said,
"Fools,
do you think the moon is caught lightly,
with glitter and silk threads?
You must cut out your hearts and bait your hooks
with those dark animals;
what matter you lose your hearts to reel in your dream?"

And they fished with their tight, hot hearts
till a traveler passed them and said,
"Fools,
what good is the moon to a heartless man?
Put back your hearts and get on your knees
and drink as you never have,
until your throats are coated with silver
and your voices ring like bells."

And they fished with their lips and tongues
until the water was gone
and the moon had slipped away
in the soft, bottomless mud.


Scheme axbx cDeaxfxx eCDxfxbx xCDxxxax xxxx
Poetic Form
Metre 10111111010 111111 111010 0110101 011101001101 1 1101111110 1111010 100101111110 111001 10111101 1101111 0111011110 101001101 1 111011110 110011 1111110111 111100 110111111011 01111111 101001101 1 1110110101 111101111 0111101 0111110110 0110111 01111101 0101011 0011101 0011001
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,129
Words 236
Sentences 8
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 8, 8, 8, 4
Lines Amount 32
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 176
Words per stanza (avg) 43
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Written on January 13, 2003

Submitted by alexanderg.88061 on November 13, 2021

Modified on April 21, 2023

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