Analysis of You are so hard on yourself

Aldo Kraas 1964 (sap paulo)



I know you are somebody of a certain age
You never go out without make up
Because you would look awful
So you wear some make up
To cover all you wrinkles
In you face
Also you have your nails done
Also you wear a beautiful silk dress
For the Summer
Also you are some sandals in you feet
And you had you feet done
You are now retire finally
And you can enjoy you
Retired life
Also you never forget to
Pray for you father
And you father answer all you prayers


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Poetic Form
Metre 11111010101 110110111 0111110 111111 1101110 011 1011111 1011010011 1010 1011110011 011111 11101100 011011 011 10110011 11110 011010111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 441
Words 93
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 17
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 364
Words per stanza (avg) 93

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Written on October 14, 2021

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Modified on March 05, 2023

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Aldo Kraas has been writing poem for 26 years He start to write poems in January 5th 1996 more…

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