Analysis of Winning Loss



I felt the blood drip down.. down... down
Down my cheek from my unfocused eyes
Down my chin from my lips, grinning
Down my arm from my shoulder
Down my fingertips from my shaking wrist
I felt my conscious slip between my fingers like sand,
I fell to my knees,
As the world started fading around me I laughed
I won the battle but at what cost?
All I could see was the ruins of the battlefield, reduced to nothing but rubble and flames.
I slumped forward my face hit the rubble.
My eyes closed my breathing slowed and slowed until it finally stopped.
The blood slowed its drip until it stopped and the world fell silent once more.


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Poetic Form
Metre 11011111 111110101 11111110 1111110 111011101 1111010111011 11111 101101001111 110101111 1111101010100111011001 1110111010 1111101010111001 01111011100111011
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 617
Words 119
Sentences 7
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 13
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 38
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 496
Words per stanza (avg) 119
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Submitted on October 13, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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