Analysis of Tepid Neglect

Bryan K Shaw 1979 (Earth)



Abandon regret for languish
 So tainted by the decay of elation.
Become erased by tepid neglect
 And grieve the lack of filth in passion.

Triumph in ruin; pale and real.
 So broken by the collapse of this facade.
Naive laughter creates mockery,
 And the heart of it all becomes flawed.


Scheme XAXA XXXX
Poetic Form Quatrain  (50%)
Metre 01001110 11010011010 010111001 010111010 10010101 11010011101 11001100 001111011
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 286
Words 56
Sentences 5
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 4, 4
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 113
Words per stanza (avg) 25

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Just how I felt when I wrote it over 20 years ago...

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Written on December 31, 1997

Submitted by tepidneglect on October 10, 2021

Modified by tepidneglect on September 11, 2022

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